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Kelly Trost's avatar

Hello Amit,

this is one of the most beautiful "ars poetica" poems I have read in a long time. Truly, very beautiful.

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

It feels like the poet is trying to gather every part of life and lay it gently on the page. There’s something really touching in the way each image becomes its own small world — clouds, rivers, mountains, forests — all held together by this quiet sense of wonder. The repetition gives the poem a kind of drifting rhythm, like someone thinking out loud and circling back to memories they don’t want to lose. I love how the poet keeps blurring the line between the poem and the person, as if both are made of the same material. There’s a softness in admitting that some poems are chosen and others are left behind, just like moments in a life. And when it calls itself “the last poem,” it doesn’t feel final at all. It feels more like someone pausing, taking a breath, and realizing that everything they’ve lived has already become part of the story they’re telling.

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